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Old 12-08-04, 09:09 PM   #6
Elemental Soul
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Voted For: Untraceable

this was close but weak.both of u can rhyme.untracable had mad nice multis and tha end has a good flow.but what u two lacked was dissing your opponent with humor and being direct with it.u have to connect punches as well if u want it to be really good.untracable gets my vote cuz he just came harder and he was consistent with his vers eand had slightly better punches
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