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IP:
Voted For: Pyro
This Was Suprisingly A Good Battle...
Dot Had Some Dope Ish In The Begining, And Actually I Think I've Seen You On Sixshot...
Wich Explains Alot Cuz Only Us Six Heads Write That Way...
Mic Seamed To Be Trying To Hard To Get Dope Wordplay...
And In The End Alot Of It Is Just Random Bull Shit...
Although Every Few Bars You Would Wow Me With One Bar...
So It Shows Me You COULD Be Hott You Just Gotta Be More Consistant...
Aiight So Here Is A Quick Breakdown:
Flow: Dot
Punches: Dot
Wordplay: Dot
Structure: Dot
Opener: Dot
Closer: Mic
Overall Enjoyment: Dot
Mic Just Wasnt Consistant Enough...
And All Your Lines Were INCREEEEEEDIBLY Streched...
So The Flow Was Killed On Every Line, Even The Good Ones...
If You Just Had Someone Help You With A Few Things You'd be Pretty Crazy At This Though...
Aiight Here Are Some Of The Highlights:
Dot:
Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really……
….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie*
And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT**
…Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant***
These Are Actually Seperate Bars But You Meshed Them Together. But The Wordplay On This Was Fucking Iiiiiiiiiinsane. I Was Feeling All Of It Especially The Bryan Line That Was Pretty Slick.
Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do
…I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you
Not A Huge Line But Its Just One Of Those Simply Ones That You Cant Help But To Feel, Pretty Nice.
Mic:
Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids
This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is
Woooooow That Was A Fucking Nice Line. See If All Your Lines Were That Length It Would Improve The Read Sooooo Much Cuz That Was A Hott Fucking Line.
Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled
But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models
This Is One Of Those Lines, Nothing All That Special. Just A Raw Ass Punch That I Just For Some Reason Reeeeally Like. Pretty Tite.
Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence!
I Like This Part Of The Bar. It Had Pretty Nice Wordplay In It But It Actually Didnt Rhym All That Well With The Other Part Of The Bar. But It Was Nice.
Like I Said Pretty Decent Battle...
Both Had Nice Wordplay n Punches...
Dot Was Just More Consistant And Mics Ish Was Soooo Streched That The Flow Was Slaughtered In Just About Every Bar...
Aiight, And I'd Apreciate If The Favor Could Be Returned On This O.M.:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702
Thanks Alot And Stay Up...
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