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Old 02-05-05, 11:47 PM   #6
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Kelsick took this one slightly i think. His personals were better and more thought out it seems. Black's punches were weak in places like the line "at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick". He was doin decent until it looks like he lost focus and his punches fell short. one didn't even have a punch "i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kick". kelsick stayed on point and used his personals well. otherwise the structure was good for both.

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