Voted For: L~S
i think im gna have to give this to l~s you have elevated alot good job here...
dopeboi...
his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak
cuz like 14 days...u too-weak
^^ nice first line kinda simple but the second line lost the punch
nigga u mo' sweet then swishas
ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas
^^ not feelin tht line i didnt get it
im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle
ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle
^^ hmm spose it was an ight punch
u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy
lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ
^^ he was never on nwa... fake personal...
overall i thought u had a coupkle of good lines... your flow was good structure was good but the vocab was too simple ill have to give you 6.10
L~s...
dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy
u anit gonna beable to cope boy
^^ no punch but good use of multies
ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap
wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap
^^ kindoff a punch good use of multies agen
homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began
^^ dont know waht was going on there
im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there
sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care
^^ decent punch but kinda simple
ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck
man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck
^^ alryt punch i guess alryyt closure...
overall i think u have elevated alot well done... you had some decnt multies in there flow was good structure was ight and u had a couple of punches in there... imma give it to you becuz of flow multies and the structure if u had more punches you wouldav won this eazy...
6.3.10
alryyt battle... stay up