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Old 02-08-05, 10:20 PM   #15
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Voted For: intensify effect

IE got this battle wrapped up
he had a way better flow and punches htat hit harder n more often. also he had some nice multies in there that just made his verse sound even better.
both of yall had pretty good structure but black mages' verse was too basic n so was the vocab. need to make ya punches more creative so they hit harder. n try to set them up better to so they hit just right nah mean...
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