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Old 02-09-05, 03:41 PM   #9
intensify effect
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Voted For: Technical

Now dont expect me to sign your record, Im straight mic elected/
Cat'll get bested,,, like the democrats election/
decent...

Thats right, government just got twizted, no question/
You need Technical support homey, thats why your shit came in second/
ok..

I ran rampant through a city with no exceptions/
I get the hype up like a geriatric erection/
ok..

Learn a lesson from this mic Im blessin/
Kid in candy stores is like when you see my weapon/
no no....

Challengin world speed records when I unload my S and Wesson/
Face bout to made look like those chimps in Reston/
not really feeling this..

Im sicker than random depictions of cig induced lung infections/
Call me the ghetto LifeGuard, when I pump your chest in/
decent ending... u lacked hard punches no multis, creativeness was decent, flow was good but u need punches man...

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Y Challenge Me Homie?..the Outcome'll B Your Defeat To Da Greatest On Da Site
U Gots No Occupation...Clearly Gambling Aint Ur Thing Homie...Cuz Ya Can't Roll Da "Dice"*
i thought it was ok untill i read u'r explaination... WEAK...

TECH'S Aint Ur Thing....U Shoulda Stepped Aside To Audio....Like Nostradamus
"KALl Jay" And Tell Him...J-Kwon Aint Shit...So At Least Yall Got Dat In Common*
decent...

Dis Dude Aint Reliable...Stick To Da Basics...Cuz Ur Lyrics Need Some Vet Recitals
Homeboi Always In Bitchslapped Cuz He Gets More No's Dan Rejects At American Idol
ha good..

Listen Rook....Im A Mic Man (McMahon)..Not Neccesirly Linda Wen I Bend Ya (Linda Mcmahon)
In TECHS Of Course I'll Kill Ya, Im "Duke" Homie I'll Rip Bitches From Virginia*
decent..

Aite Taste My Rhymes...Stop When U See Da Red Sign(My Avy)
U Could Spit Sick Of Da Dome, And Still Couldn't Make "Head Lines"
decent ending..

It Was Weaker Dan My Normal...But Hoo Cares

^^ yea u did, but it was enought o get u this win, u had better punches and was more creative which gave u the advantage...

return the favor of a honest vote PLEZ:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174354
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024