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Technical 5 100.00%
Jay Kal 0 0%
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Old 02-05-05, 12:22 AM   #1
Jay Kal
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From: The VA
Technical vs Jay Kal

IP: 36D1 2E3C

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Old 02-05-05, 12:22 AM   #2
System
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Old 02-05-05, 12:26 AM   #3
Jay Kal
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From: The VA
IP: 36D1 2E3C

Now dont expect me to sign your record, Im straight mic elected/
Cat'll get bested,,, like the democrats election/
Thats right, government just got twizted, no question/
You need Technical support homey, thats why your shit came in second/
I ran rampant through a city with no exceptions/
I get the hype up like a geriatric erection/
Learn a lesson from this mic Im blessin/
Kid in candy stores is like when you see my weapon/
Challengin world speed records when I unload my S and Wesson/
Face bout to made look like those chimps in Reston/
Im sicker than random depictions of cig induced lung infections/
Call me the ghetto LifeGuard, when I pump your chest in/
 
Old 02-05-05, 12:03 PM   #4
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Old 02-05-05, 12:08 PM   #5
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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From: -The Ring-
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Y Challenge Me Homie?..the Outcome'll B Your Defeat To Da Greatest On Da Site
U Gots No Occupation...Clearly Gambling Aint Ur Thing Homie...Cuz Ya Can't Roll Da "Dice"*
TECH'S Aint Ur Thing....U Shoulda Stepped Aside To Audio....Like Nostradamus
"KALl Jay" And Tell Him...J-Kwon Aint Shit...So At Least Yall Got Dat In Common*
Dis Dude Aint Reliable...Stick To Da Basics...Cuz Ur Lyrics Need Some Vet Recitals
Homeboi Always In Bitchslapped Cuz He Gets More No's Dan Rejects At American Idol
Listen Rook....Im A Mic Man (McMahon)..Not Neccesirly Linda Wen I Bend Ya (Linda Mcmahon)
In TECHS Of Course I'll Kill Ya, Im "Duke" Homie I'll Rip Bitches From Virginia*
Aite Taste My Rhymes...Stop When U See Da Red Sign(My Avy)
U Could Spit Sick Of Da Dome, And Still Couldn't Make "Head Lines
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It Was Weaker Dan My Normal...But Hoo Cares

***********************************His profile says he got no job.....
he can't roll da dice means he loosin to some cat named dice....lol
dis guy had the nerves to say j-kwon is one of the top five rapperz of all time
Duke murked virginia for five straight years now...virginia haven't beaten dem since 2000
 
Old 02-09-05, 12:25 AM   #6
Jay Kal
New to RV
 
From: The VA
IP: 36D1 2E3C

Quote:
Originally Posted by Technical
***********************************His profile says he got no job.....
he can't roll da dice means he loosin to some cat named dice....lol
dis guy had the nerves to say j-kwon is one of the top five rapperz of all time
Duke murked virginia for five straight years now...virginia haven't beaten dem since 2000



Wow didnt even notice this shit til now, man I hope you dont think that was a serious post bout 5 best rappers? That whole damn thread was turning into a joke, people tryin to make a case for Weezy bein top 5, I just threw in a COMPLETE joke list. And I didnt mess with any of the personal info, I do got a job but thats my own fault for not updating that. Im only really writing this because Im offended that anyone would take that shit seriously bout the shittiest "rapper" ever.
 
Old 02-09-05, 03:09 PM   #7
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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yea well too bad ur screwed i guess, anyway uppin.
 
Old 02-09-05, 03:34 PM   #8
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: 9571 24DA

Voted For: Technical

i say tech won this because he had better punches your structure is a lil fucked up but its aight he also had better vocab and he was more creative also had a coupla multi's jay had mad multi's but not many punches your verse was decent though decent vocab but it was just your lack of hard punches that lost this one return the favhttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=175255
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Old 02-09-05, 03:41 PM   #9
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Voted For: Technical

Now dont expect me to sign your record, Im straight mic elected/
Cat'll get bested,,, like the democrats election/
decent...

Thats right, government just got twizted, no question/
You need Technical support homey, thats why your shit came in second/
ok..

I ran rampant through a city with no exceptions/
I get the hype up like a geriatric erection/
ok..

Learn a lesson from this mic Im blessin/
Kid in candy stores is like when you see my weapon/
no no....

Challengin world speed records when I unload my S and Wesson/
Face bout to made look like those chimps in Reston/
not really feeling this..

Im sicker than random depictions of cig induced lung infections/
Call me the ghetto LifeGuard, when I pump your chest in/
decent ending... u lacked hard punches no multis, creativeness was decent, flow was good but u need punches man...

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Y Challenge Me Homie?..the Outcome'll B Your Defeat To Da Greatest On Da Site
U Gots No Occupation...Clearly Gambling Aint Ur Thing Homie...Cuz Ya Can't Roll Da "Dice"*
i thought it was ok untill i read u'r explaination... WEAK...

TECH'S Aint Ur Thing....U Shoulda Stepped Aside To Audio....Like Nostradamus
"KALl Jay" And Tell Him...J-Kwon Aint Shit...So At Least Yall Got Dat In Common*
decent...

Dis Dude Aint Reliable...Stick To Da Basics...Cuz Ur Lyrics Need Some Vet Recitals
Homeboi Always In Bitchslapped Cuz He Gets More No's Dan Rejects At American Idol
ha good..

Listen Rook....Im A Mic Man (McMahon)..Not Neccesirly Linda Wen I Bend Ya (Linda Mcmahon)
In TECHS Of Course I'll Kill Ya, Im "Duke" Homie I'll Rip Bitches From Virginia*
decent..

Aite Taste My Rhymes...Stop When U See Da Red Sign(My Avy)
U Could Spit Sick Of Da Dome, And Still Couldn't Make "Head Lines"
decent ending..

It Was Weaker Dan My Normal...But Hoo Cares

^^ yea u did, but it was enought o get u this win, u had better punches and was more creative which gave u the advantage...

return the favor of a honest vote PLEZ:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174354
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024
 
Old 02-09-05, 03:47 PM   #10
Khaos_daRenegade
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damn i fucked up the link here it is again http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175255
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Old 02-09-05, 05:03 PM   #11
DeHotBwoy
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From: Dub-Town
IP: 1EF6 C0BF

Voted For: Technical

Whoa structure ugly ugly ugly ugly ugly both of yall ugly struc and shit jay kal u whack work on stuff like punches aim at his body cause for u :TECHNICALY his heads to small of a target learn some personals about him get some info and use it on him but ur weak technical came with the easy win so tech u got this better punches and personals both yall had digusting structure
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Old 02-09-05, 05:22 PM   #12
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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lol uppin fo mo votes...............................
 
Old 02-10-05, 12:39 PM   #13
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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From: -The Ring-
IP: 0825 899A

uppin fo more votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.......
 
Old 02-11-05, 07:47 PM   #14
Phy-Sicks
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Voted For: Technical

good battle tech won this one
punches were iight
lines were over schtrtched tho
he needed to fix that structure cuz that shit was off
metaphors ok

jay kal
lines was iight nuthin special tho
punches were iffy cuz they really didnt get on tech
metas not really any
and most of his lines barely rhymed tho,those were off
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Old 02-11-05, 08:21 PM   #15
Cekret
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Voted For: Technical


Techincal
Kid Came Harder He Had Some Good Punches, Also Vocabulary Was Decent, His Flow Came Out Nice, But Structure Needs Work, Perosnal Was Cool, Add Some Multi's In Here Both Of You, Also Jay Kal You Need Help With Some Meta's, Go See One Man Band Tutorials

Streucture-Tech
Vocab-Tech
Punches-Tech
Multi's-Tech
Over All Flow-Tech

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