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Old 02-14-05, 07:51 PM   #6
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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im feelin this beat for an emotional type track, some nice lyrics on paper..... but ur voice is alil messed up..... canadian right? im sure itll sound fine there, juss for me its alil weird... ur quality is ok pop and click wise..... but it sounds like wen u were rappin that u were movin closer to the mic at some parts, and farther apart on others, cuz the volume varies alot word to word..... also just work on pronouncin ur words alil better.... flow was on for the most part, there was one lil mess up, but thats nothin another record take wont fix....
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