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Old 04-23-05, 11:54 AM   #11
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Voted For: Armada Da 187

ight armader u owned him easy...

this is a 1 sided battle here... casper u need to work on your punches it seemed like u was focusing on the rhymes more man... it flowed well but u had weak punches aand no perosnals... you shouldav set a line limit coz that wasnt fair armarda near enough doubled your lines which doubled your skill... armada not bad verse vocab was there, some decent punches and your structure was pretty good... the only thing i could see wrong with your is tht it was too long to read n ppl will get bored of reading it so try n do a set line limit its alot fairer then...

armada got this becuz he had better punches and better vocab.. all in all he has better skill.... keep elevatin pz
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