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Old 05-24-05, 02:15 PM   #14
E.C
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Voted For: Stanza

ight weak battle ny both ive seen better from u stanza....

stanza: ok here is how it goes... u stayed consistant throughout the verse man u had some good punches and some weaker punches never the less u kinda stayed on track... style switch at the end was good added a nice effect to it... wordplay was good thats bout it just try to thuink of better concepts for your punches

bog city: ight man sorry but i felt that quite alot of your lines were played man... like stanza think of some deceont concepts and fix up your structure and you'll be alot better ight man.....

not alot i can say in this but both of ya need to elevate but keep battling you'll get better within time...

v/ stanza for having harder punches and staying consistant throughout the battle and having better structure...

no hate... pzzz
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