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Old 06-20-05, 11:02 AM   #2
TeamOne
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ok wtf, i wrote feed for ur track twice already and both times it didnt show up wen i posted so ill break it down alot shorter....... the firstg guy shined the most on this track and really has nuthin to wrok on except gettin better lyrically (but everyone always needs that), the guy doin the hook made the track worse in my opinion.... he mumbled, the lyrics werent that great and his rhymin was kinda off..... the third guy was decent, alot better than the hook, but he didnt outshine the first guy... just get ur quality alil up on this verse, a better flow and presence, and itll be just as good as the first verse...... pc
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