Really right now I feel speechless...I don't know the words to say that will do this poem justice. Any compliment I could come up with now would be an understatement. It was beautiful, the imagery, the emotion was remarkable. This is one of the best poetic pieces I've ever read on a forum. Your creativity and talent are one of a kind, make sure you do more with it and continue to share.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...912#post2237912

^^^ return the favor.

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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold
Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds
You will realize and know it's me
I told you my story through the eyes of poetry
I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life
And I'd be damned for the strife
but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific