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06-24-05, 04:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
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The Gauntlet
IP: F95C 1B19
THE GAUNTLET
I been abandoned by the hordes, stranded by shores Branded by the wars, just a man and his sword Dripping the blood of a victim, but no remorse in me It wasn’t my choice to be…I too was forced to bleed They torched the trees of my birthplace, I was forced to leave into a worse place, beaten and treated like I wasn’t worth grace They tortured me, hoping that I’d be broke by the chambers Provoked by the strangers, as I’d hang up soaked by the anger Chambers were threshold dark, I’m envisioning my mind break My flesh holds scars, they’re only conditioning my mind state They didn’t want a sane man, the plan was form an insane clan of animalistic killers of niggers for this cannibalistic thriller I was the best at it, a flesh savage but I felt I had loss though My thoughts froze…how do you define victory to a lost soul? Survival isn’t victory, cause’ us survivors couldn’t free our seeds Or say “We are free”—so victory’s defined as just a song by B.I.G We mourn and produced few strong they knew we’d choose wrong Though they didn’t like that plan, they let us loose as living proof we’d fail without a righteous hand in the gauntlet…life of a black man Now I see the light of the right path, but before I can speak… I feel a knife to back…stabbed Copyright © 2005 Prolific FEATURED,NICE JOB~fluid
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds You will realize and know it's me I told you my story through the eyes of poetry I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life And I'd be damned for the strife but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific Last edited by fluidmoon : 07-11-05 at 01:51 PM. |
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06-25-05, 02:37 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: EFD1 7F89
uppin..........
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds You will realize and know it's me I told you my story through the eyes of poetry I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life And I'd be damned for the strife but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific |
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06-25-05, 07:43 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
holy shit dude, this could be a song lol, i was listening to to some instrumentals for this shit i am working on,but i read your poem to the beat and it was dope..nice emotion in this piece and vocab too..it is a strong piece, i was feeling it,1.i edited your post because i was going to feature it now, but since i only feature 3 at a time to leave room for others,i will feature this in a few days..1
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06-26-05, 01:09 AM | #4 | |||
*Murder Was The Case*
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IP: 0086 7B47
this was nice, i like the emotion. i put this to the beat of ASAP, and it sounded pretty tight, just to see what MOON waz talkin bout, and it has some amazing flow. the vocab was an A+. i like the emotion bieng foreplayed. very deep.
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