its straight the beat choice couldve been better. I think that you got good emotion and imagery is iight. Your vocal quality is kinda messed up, you sound real wierd. But I think its decent. The beginning wasnt that interesting but the middle and the end was better. Just get a better beat and quality and would be pretty good.
Can you leave feed on this please thanks 1
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