Damn this was actually pretty good, I liked the hook, nice touch.

Paranoid:
Your flow was great, structure on par. The shortness of your lines just made it stand out all the more. I like your choice of language. All in all, nice job bro.

Sin:
Damn man, nice job on the hook (i'm sure it wasnt TOO hard to come up with, but it went along good) Your structure wasnt as good as Par's, but it didnt seem to hinder your flow much at all. I liked the vocab tyou used, not overdone, just enough.

You both seemed to get your points accross well enough, keep it up!

7/10

RTF in the link on my sig, peace.

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