CS reppin once again!

Atty, I can appreciate your attempt at keeping it original, and it worked (I had to read your parts twice to make it fluid) but I think your normal style would have made it simpler to read for others. Overall I enjoyed the content and the topic the most. Multies were pretty good too.

Mak, First drop i've read from you, and I was impressed, glad you're onboard with C.S. I thought you had a strong emotion (both of you did) but your verses seemed simpler to me (the vocab) the flow was on point though.

As for the structure, again it wasnt a big deal, it just takes a bit more concentration to appreciate it.

Top-notch collab chrymies, keep it up!

P.S. Atty go ahead and drop a feed on 'Blurred Vision' in my Sig.
Thnx Fukr.

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