Thread: KriZ vs Defined
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Old 10-17-05, 02:51 AM   #8
Illist
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Voted For: Defined

Wordplay- Defined.
Complexity- Defined.
Punches- Defined.

V/ Defined.

Reason- Well, pretty much he won every category by reasonable amount.. His punches hit harder even tho some missed. He had some werdplay attempts as well..

Kriz- You should try to think of some harder punches and include meta's/ similes in your punches cos they help strengthen them..
Also fix up ya rhyme scheme cos in the super soakers bar it didnt rhyme.. Well stay up homies.

Return the Favor- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798

P'z..
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