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Room sits with jaws long, an awe sat stunned.
Watch the two fuse together, then fall as one.
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Those line's were dope atty'. Your emotion was pretty strong, felt that in the quoted lines. Flow was pretty consistant, but your verse had a poetic feeling to it > an OM.
Valor, Nice drop, however I feel you could have improved upon your rhyme scheme and vocab, a little. your flow was pretty good, as was your imagery.
All in all, nice collab
I wasnt in Katrina but I went there to help..