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Old 12-15-05, 05:31 PM   #3
Mentalz
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Pretty nice drop man. Nice flow through out, good multies. A few of the bars were off ina couple places, but not by much.

Fairly simple rhyme scheme though, and low cal. vocab in my opinion. Up those two things and you'd be alot better.

Punches were'nt too bad either.

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