I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
With Enough Skill To Place Drills In Your Bones
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
Ill Enough To Spill Enough Skills Were I Roam
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
If You Got Shit To Say Then Place It On Hold
Cause I'm Rippin Up And Bringin' Up
Ill Enough To Take Your Style And Live It Up
Cause I'm Just Real Enough..........

Verse 1
I'm Ill Enough To Straight Jack Your Style And Diss You
You Got More Short Lines Than PC's With Technical Issues
Infectional Tissue Got My Punchlines Lyrically Sickning
It's Phsyically Itchin For Other To See Me Literally Fishin
For Another Fish In The Sea, I'm Dissin Emcees
Strippin The Key To A Succes As Successful As Me
I'll Lie Down But You Skills Still Ain't High Now
Parents? When Most Can't Even Raise The Crowds Eyebrows
I'll Knock A Fool Who Tries To Lay Down Obsticles
I'm Born To Be Ill, Like A Demented Child Born At A Hospital
Seriouly Make Your Lyrical Birth Get An Abortion
Distortion, Cause You Was Droppin Shit, So I Forced It In
A Mortician Disecting Your Lyrical Combat, Bomb Rap
Holding More Weight On Me Than An Elephants Ball Sack
Haull Ass Once You See Me As Threat To Your Career
Walk In Breakin Your Records Til Your Audio's Droppin Tears

I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
With Enough Skill To Place Drills In Your Bones
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
Ill Enough To Spill Enough Skills Were I Roam
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
If You Got Shit To Say Then Place It On Hold
Cause I'm Rippin Up And Bringin' Up
Ill Enough To Take Your Style And Live It Up
Cause I'm Just Real Enough..........

Verse 2
I'm Mentally Disfigured After Sedatives And Liquor
Can't Place Down A Fuck You, I Got A Heavy Middle Finger
See, I've Come To Emmacutate Articulate Artists
You Give Brain Away, So Let's See Who The Smartest
Honestly, I'm A Criminal Wanted For Armed Robbery
When Most Mc's Wanted For Biting, It's Gran Larceny
Man Up To Me And Pick Up The Mic After I Drop It
Cause Being With Men Is The Only Time Ya'll Able To Cock It
Stop It, Your Rhymes Are Ill, As Well As Cold, But Not Positively
Ill Like They Been In The Cold Two Weeks After You Bit Me
And Try To Use My Rhymes, Claim My Style As Yours
I'm As Wild As Tours, Done Around Iraquian Morgues
Highly Packin A Torch, But Not Close To Handin It Down
Pressin Cow Manure Is The Only Time You Holding Shit Down
I'll Speak Of Gore, Violence, And Still Preach The Lord
While I Hunt Down Victims At Haunted Beach Resorts
Meet A Folk Who's Got More Huge Rocks Than A New Watch
But In Weight So Heavy It Breaks Off Ceilings And Roof Tops
Newbs Lock They Door And Make Sure To Swallow The Key
So I Can't Get In They Bubble To Discover They're Weak
I'll Take Your Sister, Bend Her Over And Rub On Her Cheeks
Til She Down On Her Knees.....
And Finds Out Rhymes Ain't The Only Thing Coming From Me

I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
With Enough Skill To Place Drills In Your Bones
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
Ill Enough To Spill Enough Skills Were I Roam
I Stand Alone Holding A Mic On The Throne
If You Got Shit To Say Then Place It On Hold
Cause I'm Rippin Up And Bringin' Up
Ill Enough To Take Your Style And Live It Up
Cause I'm Just Real Enough..........

Uppin For Feedback.........................

Pretty nice drop man. Nice flow through out, good multies. A few of the bars were off ina couple places, but not by much.

Fairly simple rhyme scheme though, and low cal. vocab in my opinion. Up those two things and you'd be alot better.

Punches were'nt too bad either.

Peace.

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Blow It - Topical

Aight Mentalz, Thanks For The Feed Fam..............

Eeek. The Punches was alright some were played, some were good, but mostly it was played out. You got nice flow here in your verse throughout this whole piece and what kept me interesting to your Verse was the wordplays you had in it. Keep it up and Them 2 things Mentalz point out, should make you better. Keep writing.

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

I was feeling this peice man it would be nice if you could drop a bit of feed back on my spits sometime. But this is deff a very good song and I felt the flow and what you were saying.

I'll Return The Favor Tech And Thanks For The Pointer Sab..................

Not bad mate. I liked the words and rhymes you were using, clever. It flowed good to, I had a little rhyme along with it, and it's good playa