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Old 12-17-05, 10:36 PM   #10
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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i wanted to use this beat

anyways....... u had good flow and ok presence...... pretty decent lyrics

everything is really comin together EXCEPT Emotion..... where the fuck is it???? ur half dead/half asleep on this track... which will leave me sleepin on u until u improve that...... u cant expect me to feel wat ur sayin if ur not puttin any feelin into it

overall decent track
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