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Old 01-16-06, 10:06 PM   #11
Mentalz
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Nice drop fams, mushy stuff, meh.

Flow was good, and i'd say out of the 6 or so pieces I replied to today, this was the best. It was very deep, very emotional and very real. Structure doesnt matter aslong as it flows and has a drawn concept. I can't critic this piece the same as I would the norm. OM because you wrote it to your girl from your heart and the same rules dont seem to apply. Though I will say this, the I and U thing is corny, I had some gay guy say it to me at work so maybe im just allergic to that line or something, lol. Keep it up bro, nice drop. Thanks for the multiple feeds on my pieces the past week. I'll hit up some more later.

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