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Old 03-20-06, 09:26 PM   #2
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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BEATTTTTTTT IS KILLER

Sorry, but ima have to steal it......! god damn

now to u..... i like the drop drop drop and pop pop pop, but some of the hooks flow is so weird it sounds alil off beat, might wanna come wit alil more commecial flow for this type of beat...... and it sounds like u clipped on the "mean" from "mean to" and "leg" from "legal"..... it just seems like u could mix down the hook alil better..... i like the "gal" and "to" and "sel" with that double in the back, but the hook might need alil work

ur flow is nice, and keeps ur attention cuz its not the same throughout and ur lyrics are always there although these werent ur best..... i think if u just either mixed the hook down alil differently or changed it up alil bit, this shit would be complete fire

pc...... i dunno if u left feed on my "At Home" track, i cant remember, but if u didnt, u can RTF there.....
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