http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox


^^Click on "Drop drop drop"


Hook Q
Verses: Q


Concept: I dunno...club type joint...but the lyrics don't necessarily fit a club track


Holla with you spins



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224099
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224252

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Sorry, but ima have to steal it......! god damn

now to u..... i like the drop drop drop and pop pop pop, but some of the hooks flow is so weird it sounds alil off beat, might wanna come wit alil more commecial flow for this type of beat...... and it sounds like u clipped on the "mean" from "mean to" and "leg" from "legal"..... it just seems like u could mix down the hook alil better..... i like the "gal" and "to" and "sel" with that double in the back, but the hook might need alil work

ur flow is nice, and keeps ur attention cuz its not the same throughout and ur lyrics are always there although these werent ur best..... i think if u just either mixed the hook down alil differently or changed it up alil bit, this shit would be complete fire

pc...... i dunno if u left feed on my "At Home" track, i cant remember, but if u didnt, u can RTF there.....

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

i like the beat the verses keep consistant nothing special but dont give that off beat fealing or that you shouldnt be spiting on it so its good i think you get hyper then that though

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Weird beat, it was panning all over lol, the chorus is not bad but could be better. The flow is fine, however this beat is awfully hard 2 ride, cause that fuckin synth takes all the attention and annoys. Your lyrics are fine nothin above the average. The quality is fine, props on that dog!

pz
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...836#post2695836

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