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Old 11-15-06, 09:47 PM   #18
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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listenin.... hahaha, nice intro

Verse 1: like the presence..... mixin is aight.... pretty decent flow on this shit... didnt like "flyin higher than life" just sounded real weird out ur voice.... u sound the most comfortable on this song.... but lyrics arent the best

Hook: hook is decent..... but the effect on it makes it sound alil muffled.....

Verse 2: good shit enygma..... better punches than the bronsky on this shit, and overall better lines... voice sounds decent on the beat.... "almost never green" hah..... u def had the best lyrics on this track....

Verse 3: IM lovin that fuckin effect on the end of the line.... the doubles with the screwed voice... that was raw... i think u lyrically had the worst verse, but it was real nice with that effect.... makes ur verse one of the more enjoyable actually....word

haha, pretty good outro... hopefully a song about gettin pussy is next

overal pretty nice track, one of the better tracks with u 3.... wat would ur daughter think tho Nyg

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216
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