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Old 11-18-06, 11:43 AM   #2
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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always loved this beat.... and we know why YOU picked this beat... ur intro adlibs are way toooooo soft, but im pretty sure u did that on purpose, i can still hear them if im expectin them... we know about the quality, but its pretty good for basically not havin a mic.... pretty good presence delivery

beat switchup was pretty weak, and i dont like the new beat, sorry....

and ur flow is still good but it just sounds really weird on this beat, doesnt seem to fit.... i just really hate this beat.......... it seems like u repeated the same lines on this beat... the unibrow shit is basically the same, except u replaced like "straight" with "solid"... its a good line, but u dont needa say it again, hah...... norman bates line, lmao.... this shit was pretty good, but the beat was a hiorrid choice to switch into....

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216
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