ehhh not bad i give u a 7/10....im just giving my opinion no hate or anything just the way i see it better like this than me lieing to u....anyways....your punches were a little off to me but no doubt i see potential in them...same with your multis.....i see these type of structured written keystyles all the time with the "CAPPED" words and "dashes" threw the multis to decorate....but ehh to me its not really needed to decorate like that unless u doing "quotations"....to have someone think about something....but yeah i think the capped shit and all that decorating gotta go......it messes up your structure kind of....and it reminds me of someone on this site named Fly -E...he types his shit the same way....the styles played to.....no doubt though u got potential.....keep doing what u do this just my feedback......~1~
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243760
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243605
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243609
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243504
^^^^theres some of my post.....if u can check em out and give me some feed.......im coming with some new shit soon....~1~