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Old 05-11-03, 08:38 PM   #2
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ok krazy heres the break down.

vocab:weak...ure using plain words, mix it up and put soem new words in.
Flow:decent, pretty good but try and use some multis it would make it really tite

Overall: 7/10 (Decent)

keep spittin and check out my stuff

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