A King Missing a Queen...
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IP:
T-WEST
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yo,yo,yo..
So explict has come to face the master MC/
Now tyme to give ya the lyrical SARS disease/
-Lame and over used-
Cuz imma make u sick, u mutha fukkin prick/
Prove dat aint a pen but ur mutha fukkin dick/
-an attempt, but couldnt finish it-
U wanted a vet, but u cant handle dis rookie/
U just eat pussy, like der fukkin cookies/
-Why are you ganna compliment him-
Nigga ur mushy, u just real soft/
Probably sit at ur computer screen n masturbate to Laura croft/
-weak
Cuz u get a real gurl? Haha, ders only one fukkin way/
And that’s when Ja beats 50, so don’t count on dat day/
-almost went somewhere-
This forums ar getting boring, wit guys like explict/
They should’t even rap, go bak to country music/
-week-
Cuz u aint a real rapper, u say the word rap in vain/
U’d b better of dick ridin Shania twain/
-No Comment-
Don’t even try to come bak, cuz ur already my next victum/
I raped ya like Michael Jackson to those kids…STRAIGHT UP THE
BUM!/
-Could have been alot better-
---> Verse was weak, many attempts, but they didnt land right. Need to elevate, work on things... 4 / 10
-EXPLICIT-
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t-west the great? Fuck that your just another
new bitch to rape//
Im spitting your fate,
Why do you hang off so many peoples nuts?
Have you got pubics to rate?//
-pretty good opener-
Your tiny brain hasn’t even got enough cubic
space to win a two faced one coloured rubix race//
-Not Hitting to hard-
This prick couldn’t spit hot bars if he locked
lead pipes into his ultra wide pop tarts//
-Pretty good, creative-
You havent got sparks,
t-west couldn’t hit hard and onpoint if he
was on a sky scraper and dropped darts//
-Straight, didnt hit to hard-
Ive got a murderous mind,
and these words of mine are my verbalist knives
Even a worthless mime could curve your spine//
so if your thinking of winning, get to the back
of the herbiest line//
-Could have been better-
You act like your genders been switched,
so if I refer to you as my dog, what I really mean
is you my bitch..//
-Weak-
Finisher: You could'nt COOK up a Flow //
even if you Had the Recipe? //
beatin me in a punches must //
be a joke, the closest thing you ever //
came to pussy was your mom's pink ivory soap. //
-Had the right Idea, bad closer though-
---> I think you could have came harder, the both of you. The punches wernt hitting to hard, But they were harder than his. I think all the others would agree. 5.5 / 10
Vote - Explicit
( Rules didnt say crew couldnt vote, just being honest though... Take my vote away if you dont agree with me Mod's )
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
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