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Good Luck!!!

checkin in................................................ ..........t-west is here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good luck man!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96117

vote for this and i'll vote for you guy's battle when its done.....one......

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yo,yo,yo..
So explict has come to face the master MC/
Now tyme to give ya the lyrical SARS disease/
Cuz imma make u sick, u mutha fukkin prick/
Prove dat aint a pen but ur mutha fukkin dick/
U wanted a vet, but u cant handle dis rookie/
U just eat pussy, like der fukkin cookies/
Nigga ur mushy, u just real soft/
Probably sit at ur computer screen n masturbate to Laura croft/
Cuz u get a real gurl? Haha, ders only one fukkin way/
And that’s when Ja beats 50, so don’t count on dat day/
This forums ar getting boring, wit guys like explict/
They should’t even rap, go bak to country music/
Cuz u aint a real rapper, u say the word rap in vain/
U’d b better of dick ridin Shania twain/
Don’t even try to come bak, cuz ur already my next victum/
I raped ya like Michael Jackson to those kids…STRAIGHT UP THE BUM!/




My bad explict, had to take a run 2 the store, but i got bak in tyme to post my verse.

Dont need no 40 minutes 2 spit/
dis is freestyle, ya just type ur shit/
and when ur done u click/
and then ya watch after i win, all dem bitches guh wanna suck my dick/


Haha, ill embarass ya now, dis battle guh end ur whole show/
cuz guess wat, ur losin to a 15 year old nigga from the T.O/
it aint even so bad dat hes young, or dat hes jamaican/
But uz an american, losin in rap, to a fukkin canadian


Dat aint a flow, just like to talk in rhyme.

yo that doesnt count as part of your verse..cause u already posted.. you cant do shit like this dawg.. you post 1 verse and 1 only..what u just wrote doesnt count...

PZ

Merking In Progress....

t-west the great? Fuck that your just another
new bitch to rape//

Im spitting your fate,
Why do you hang off so many peoples nuts?
Have you got pubics to rate?//

Your tiny brain hasn’t even got enough cubic
space to win a two faced one coloured rubix race//

This prick couldn’t spit hot bars if he locked
lead pipes into his ultra wide pop tarts//

You havent got sparks,
t-west couldn’t hit hard and onpoint if he
was on a sky scraper and dropped darts//

Ive got a murderous mind,
and these words of mine are my verbalist knives
Even a worthless mime could curve your spine//

so if your thinking of winning, get to the back
of the herbiest line//

You act like your genders been switched,
so if I refer to you as my dog, what I really mean
is you my bitch..//

Finisher: You could'nt COOK up a Flow //
even if you Had the Recipe? //
beatin me in a punches must //
be a joke, the closest thing you ever //
came to pussy was your mom's pink ivory soap. //

Merk Complete.

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yo liste explict got this one
new guy needs to elavate
personals/ex
punches/ex
meta/both
multi/ex
opener/ex
closer/ex
vocab/ex
my vote explict
yo fool why havent you poll voted in this one dogg
you said i won, so poll vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96065

this was easy win........

punches flow metas dissing structure........all go to explicit

both hit this battle up................peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96488

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thanks for the votes ya'll It you forgot to poll vote.............................................. ..............................................

^^^IT vote on the Poll^^^^

T-WEST
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yo,yo,yo..
So explict has come to face the master MC/
Now tyme to give ya the lyrical SARS disease/
-Lame and over used-

Cuz imma make u sick, u mutha fukkin prick/
Prove dat aint a pen but ur mutha fukkin dick/
-an attempt, but couldnt finish it-

U wanted a vet, but u cant handle dis rookie/
U just eat pussy, like der fukkin cookies/
-Why are you ganna compliment him-

Nigga ur mushy, u just real soft/
Probably sit at ur computer screen n masturbate to Laura croft/
-weak

Cuz u get a real gurl? Haha, ders only one fukkin way/
And that’s when Ja beats 50, so don’t count on dat day/
-almost went somewhere-

This forums ar getting boring, wit guys like explict/
They should’t even rap, go bak to country music/
-week-

Cuz u aint a real rapper, u say the word rap in vain/
U’d b better of dick ridin Shania twain/
-No Comment-

Don’t even try to come bak, cuz ur already my next victum/
I raped ya like Michael Jackson to those kids…STRAIGHT UP THE
BUM!/
-Could have been alot better-

---> Verse was weak, many attempts, but they didnt land right. Need to elevate, work on things... 4 / 10




-EXPLICIT-
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t-west the great? Fuck that your just another
new bitch to rape//
Im spitting your fate,
Why do you hang off so many peoples nuts?
Have you got pubics to rate?//
-pretty good opener-

Your tiny brain hasn’t even got enough cubic
space to win a two faced one coloured rubix race//
-Not Hitting to hard-

This prick couldn’t spit hot bars if he locked
lead pipes into his ultra wide pop tarts//
-Pretty good, creative-

You havent got sparks,
t-west couldn’t hit hard and onpoint if he
was on a sky scraper and dropped darts//
-Straight, didnt hit to hard-

Ive got a murderous mind,
and these words of mine are my verbalist knives
Even a worthless mime could curve your spine//
so if your thinking of winning, get to the back
of the herbiest line//
-Could have been better-

You act like your genders been switched,
so if I refer to you as my dog, what I really mean
is you my bitch..//
-Weak-

Finisher: You could'nt COOK up a Flow //
even if you Had the Recipe? //
beatin me in a punches must //
be a joke, the closest thing you ever //
came to pussy was your mom's pink ivory soap. //
-Had the right Idea, bad closer though-

---> I think you could have came harder, the both of you. The punches wernt hitting to hard, But they were harder than his. I think all the others would agree. 5.5 / 10

Vote - Explicit

( Rules didnt say crew couldnt vote, just being honest though... Take my vote away if you dont agree with me Mod's )

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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yo aight

this was a total merking by Explicit

opener x
pounches X
flow X
closer X

overall X

yo this aint the only new guy postin more then one verse were do they get this from??

anyway new guy you need to elevate

peace