Deacon - You had a consistant flow, pretty good vocab, and had some pretty good lines in there. I dont agree with your thoughts in there, but you expressed your feelings really good. The rhyme scheme was really simple, and some vocab could have been used better. This was good, just didnt really shine in me eyes... Nice Drop though

Rob D - Pretty much the same deal, good flow, and some good lines in there. What made this really good was the subject you brought up, like your story and all. It was diffrent, and not many people would have come up with somthing like you did. I felt you used your vocab just right, and it was a good drop... Nice

Vote - Rob D

conclusion - I liked where he took te topic, and I was just feeling his verse more. It was a hard choice, because you could have put your own thought in there like Deacon did... Really Close...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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