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Old 08-28-04, 03:14 AM   #1
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i need some input on this first verse...

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verse 1
walkin in the middle of a death trap of sand
the lies and all the shit just pilin up in my hands
when all of a sudden shit gets outta control
i trip over my words and stumble into a hole
its like quick sand, it just keeps pullin me under
when i try to get out, it makes me wonder
is this life even worth it? is it just a big trip?
then i struggle a bit more and then fuckin slip.
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Old 08-28-04, 03:15 AM   #2
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its tight the rhymin...
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