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Old 08-29-06, 12:48 AM   #1
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Post ~~~~!sinnister Camp!~~~( Unreleased!)

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My life´s a mess n´ I couldn´t care less
I steal your breath and become your death
Bonded by blood, a united force
Angels of hell, there´s no remorse
Big brother´s watching, every night n´ day
The shadow riders are here to stay
In battle there is no law, or so they say
I roll the dice n´break you twice, my way
The enemy faceless, still everywhere
Your graves nameless, I´ll do my share

Disciples unbound where ever u are
Knights in armour, prepared for war
Hair is blowing in the cold wind
Summon the troops, the system can´t win
Dressed in uniforms, skulls on their caps
They´re on the prowl, now don´t you collapse
With the big S at the wheel, they sat on the gas
Marching through cities, a massacre mass
Trained to torment, they were the champs
Working overtime in The Sinnister camps
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Old 08-29-06, 12:50 AM   #2
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Old 08-29-06, 01:22 AM   #3
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This is a str8 and dark drop...vocabs always good. I aint one to judge OM coz I dont know much about writing one really but yours is tight. just gotta slow down the turn of events. the way I do that is by trying to give each even atleast an entire bar or 2. still a str8 drop

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Old 08-29-06, 03:58 PM   #4
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you need one more link or this will be closed.
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Old 08-29-06, 04:00 PM   #5
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233346

Wtf man i leave so much god dam fucking feedback in this fourm it aint even funny

Shut the fuck up and leave your links like you're supposed to.

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Old 08-29-06, 04:10 PM   #6
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This wasnt a bad piece..but i felt like u had a nursery rhyme flow which kinda threw me off...none the less still a decent drop.
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Old 08-29-06, 08:09 PM   #7
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good drop man i like it flow preety good an the way i was spitting it out loud man it would def go nice on a beat instead of just a read but i like it it was tuff an good going nice job
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Old 08-29-06, 08:54 PM   #8
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i liked the vocab, i liked the rhymin, i thought it was pretty good
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Old 08-31-06, 10:16 AM   #9
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Close it close it close it close it, PLEASE CLOSE THIS...THANKS!
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