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10-25-04, 10:18 PM | #1 | |
Heavyweight Championship: Triple N .vs. Sdizzle
IP: C38B B51C
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10-25-04, 10:31 PM | #2 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 64E3 6603
10 bitch
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701689 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701692 Last edited by sdizzle : 10-30-04 at 10:05 PM. |
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10-26-04, 12:11 AM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 36C3 7C54
Checkin' in...u beat me?....u must be dillusional...lmfao
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157342
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is Last edited by Triple_N : 10-30-04 at 01:51 AM. |
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10-28-04, 12:03 AM | #4 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: EECF 4742
i unno man........... he might do it.....
Freepost in here again and you will be suspended for a week -iky Last edited by Ikynovel : 10-28-04 at 12:30 AM. |
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10-28-04, 09:57 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 64E3 6603
his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting
triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly? REAL BAD when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy how hes the champ? is this a joke? these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse he lacks........ personals, flow, style ,structure, intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent, finesse, composure, comprehension the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical |
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10-29-04, 11:55 PM | #6 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156117
This personal will never die^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls) This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight) He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack" Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!!
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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10-29-04, 11:57 PM | #7 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Yes I edited it becuz for some reason when I posted it every line crowded around the link I provided an it was unreadable....so hopefully I don't get DQed but goodluck to S Dizzle
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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10-30-04, 12:56 AM | #8 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: 08CF 169D
sdizzle
his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing ery1 trys it...no whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly? REAL BAD when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy nice how hes the champ? is this a joke? these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video decent now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse he lacks........ personals, flow, style ,structure, intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent, finesse, composure, comprehension the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse funny but no you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical nope Triple N He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls) ok This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight) ok He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years decent Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts no! Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack" Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!! ok but bored with it V/ dizzle Okay Triple...u went at him being fat the whole time...it got boring after the 1st bar...gotta go at him from other concepts to win...dizzle came witty in places...
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10-30-04, 01:52 AM | #9 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Damn I knew if I came half ass this^^^^would happen...same shit every battle, I shoulda listened to my fist mind.
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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10-30-04, 01:59 AM | #10 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
well check this this is an honest vote
Sdizzle Your shit was ill i was feelin it...i dont like that structure though and you had some OK vocab..wordplay was nice...personals...ok.....punches was dope......meta's decent...this shit was aiight fam...i thought this shit was a lil above average..... triple: I gave this win to you Because Your personal and Your Opener..the stomache grin line was dope....that shit boht had me crackin up so i gave this too you because you came much harder ....your shit was nice...punches hit em hard...personal DOPE...metas decent.....wordplay nice....vocab..ok Vote: Triple N
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10-30-04, 01:54 PM | #11 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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UPPING lol .
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10-31-04, 05:32 AM | #12 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 9FA1 B27A
ok.. can i just say.
SDIZZLE BEING FAT PUNCHES ARE PLAYED we've been through it, and heard all the dizzle punches there is... they were funny the first time.. but not anymore.. dizzle came alright, some blah shit.. some alright shit... triple N based his concepts on dizzle being fat, although he had other shit.. i didnt feel it much.. v/dizzle
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10-31-04, 03:11 PM | #13 | ||||
The Watcher
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IP: 28D6 AD76
aight,
dizzle, first off--good verse, but the sturcture coulda definitely used some improvement.....i didnt really find anythin outstandin, but u had good vocab...along wit decent personals n punches the whole way thru, so u had good consistency... Triple, ya verse was straight too...structure was good, but...the fat jokes got REAL old...especially since i've seen A LOT against sdizzle...i mean shit, u had good consistency, but in my eyes, u were jus sayin "you're fat" "you're fat" wit each bar...it was aight wit the first bar or two, but then it got real played... V/ sdizzle... |
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11-01-04, 12:53 AM | #14 | |
IP: AEBA 9CCC
Closed. Sdizzle wins.
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"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine.... I got the lettuce and... ...you turn green like cucumber skin Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then... drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..." Quote:
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