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Check in by: 06-09-05 at 07:31 AM

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E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 07:03 AM.

¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 07:04 AM.

the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,

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_Explanations_

* look at the bar in his sig i went off that
** his avy sayz illuminate and he has a lil circle of his A kinda like a halo in his name halo illuminates god lives in clouds,...fuck it u get it lol
*** ight his user title... pzz'z i just see z's like he gets slept on get it? blah lol
**** last leg as in last place last legs as in nearly dead

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that sums it up man g'luck wit this fam...
all votes returned no matter who u vote for
hope u like

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E.C- Untitled

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

ight good verse fam lets get some votes in this...

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E.C- Untitled

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
6...decent personal playin off the bar like that....although i think it cud've been worded better.
claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
5...ok line, but then the setup is not really that relevant to the punch itself.
i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
5...decent punch....gud wordplay with the stumped/tree shit, second line too basic though and more of a statement.
i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
5...half 'n' half again....i think that you came with a fairly weak setup and the punch itself was mediocre.
whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,
5...weak setup, good punchline with decent wordplay in there again.

OVERALL: 26/50 (52%)

think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
6...decent opener, although i dont think the wax wordplay worked all that well, wax/wacks <--that is how it wud've been better, makin the wack plural!!
this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
5...not really feelin this, kinda choppy and the setup was too basic and weak.
easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
6...ok concept in the second line, gud play on his name!!
ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
5...ok wordplay, cud be better and the setup again wasn't all that good.

OVERALL: 22/40 (55%)


daz gets it barely, both were equally consistent, just Daz had a couple of nice punches, E.C only had one, the rest were mediocre, gud punchlines with wack setups. also, it dont seem like either person put that much effort into it....

either way....

V/ - DAZ

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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
^^ Ahhh nice meta, like the creativity of it, decent punch nice opener.

this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
^^ Ahh i like the personal and the way you word it, made the bar of punch decent.

easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
^^^ ANother personal, off his name. Meh, didnt feel that was a effective punch, meh maybe it just me

ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
^^ Nice wordplay here, I like the set up line and the punch along with it, nice closer


Overall=This verse was good decent punches, and wordplays, had meta'z in there, but you could've come harder i've seen better from you, but this was a good drop.

the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
^^ Hmmmm coud've word it a bit different, but this was a ok punch, ok opener.

claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
^^ The 1st line was blah punch unless that was a set up line, the 2nd was ok punch, not great nor weak, but a ok effective punch.

i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
^^^ Ahh got a wordplay in here, it was ok, i've seen it beofre....Played. THe 2nd line is played also....making this not a effective punch.

i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
^^^ Ok, i felt this wasn't a hard punch, i felt it could've been better.

whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,
^^ Meh Didn't like the closer at all, but it was a effective punch but weak.


Overall=E.C. You had good few bars of decent punches, but the rest was blah man, either it was played out or it was a weak punch attempt. But you had an ok verse.


Conclusion=This was an "ok" battle, daz you had good punches, nice flow with wordplay and meta'z. I'mma have to vote for daz because he came harder with the punches, even though he had a played line (moses) he came back up on his next line, and the closer was a decent wordplay. E.C. The only reason i've not voted for you, because your punches didnt hit harder, Wordplays was good, but the punches wasn't connecting. They were effective but it wasn't hard to beat daz....

No hate

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E.C. Return a favor in my battle with drakel man, honest vote.

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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

good battle but daz came with fire here.

think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster

good punch, sure ive seen the concept before though.

this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..

hahahaha dope, nice nameplay and punch.

easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark

hahaha again nice nameplay with an original punch

ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…

dope closer, summed up a dope verse.]

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the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*

pretty nice punch, good opener.

claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**

nice personal, ok punch!

i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***

meh not a bad punch but wasnt feelin the concept.

i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****

pretty nice.

whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,

nice closer.

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EC had pretty good punches and attempted personals, but daz came a lot harder with nameplay and punches. both flowed well but imo daz came harder so takes this. no hate.

rtf daz or this will be removed!

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wont press the wrong button this time.............................. sorry for gettin ur hopes up in that nos battle daz......

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i dont understand why you just wont vote..?
were not crew, unless you think you'd be honest..
but if this keeps up, ill boycott all of tc n ol'tc fam
from voting.....n you didnt get my hopes up....
i couldnt care less cuz im out soon anyhow....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

............... wont vote on fam battle, peeping polls

uppin for votes...... crews cam vote man i aint arsed lol

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E.C- Untitled

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Aight DAZ got this.......

DAZ
1. line was an alright opener.... 6/10
2. nice wordplay / nameplay 7/10
3. nice name play still... and wordplay.. 7/10
4. nice punch and name play again.. 7/10
5. nice punch and closer... not amazing but good 7/10

E.C.
1. alright punch..... not feelin the 2nd line too much.. 6/10
2. not bad.. not amazing.. 6/10
3. not a good personal.. and really played line.. 5/10
4. not feelin the last legs line.. its aight but not fittin.. 6/10
5. not feelin the closer... considering fury and glory.. dont rhyme... and the last line aint too good.. 5/10

overall DAZ got this.... he had a better verse.. and it was harder hitting.........

overall.... vote DAZ

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