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08-09-05, 12:26 PM | #31 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
sleeeeeeeept on
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08-09-05, 06:02 PM | #32 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
hey yall this was all right but let me drop this little piece up in here
When a girl give up cake in a hot relation its like a state Of intoxication you drunk off kisses the junk reminisces Your brain try have sex before she grab the kotex // Cats post scorn clout with a bad voice They sound like a worn out sad horse You don’t sit in saddles during legit battles Misfits can only rattle microphones you don’t straddle Funk like I do |
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08-09-05, 06:52 PM | #33 | |||||
BeAnToWN rEp
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IP: 3240 794D
good drop drakel....had a sick flow.....good vocab.....nice stucture...good imagery....everything was hott.....i was feelin this 1...rtf...on any in ma sig
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08-09-05, 07:23 PM | #34 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: 0825 899A
good OM drakel. the flow was good but sketchy sometimes. so work on that. your topic was sorta original but dealt with well. u had some good imagery and emotion throughout it. you impressed me on this one, being as its one of the first things ive enjoyed that uve written. good drop. the rhyming was good, sometimes forced but it flowed well. so good job on that also. keep dropping and hit up my OM White Flag.
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08-12-05, 02:55 AM | #35 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
word, thanks fo-feed
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08-12-05, 01:17 PM | #36 | ||||
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this was a nice drop, i was feelin how yall switch off and on, in the verse. i might have to borrow that in a project im doin. but neway there was plenty of good bars in here so i couldnt really pick a fav one. but yall both came hard wit good flow. even tho it was purple and pink i give it a 9/10 lol. RETURN the favor holla at the sig
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08-15-05, 03:06 PM | #37 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Drkale, where you be at son?
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08-15-05, 03:24 PM | #38 | |||||||
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IP: 742C 7013
yo OSB u gettin another OM done???
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08-16-05, 01:09 PM | #39 | ||||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Quote:
attending to my patients yo, have to keep the business up
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08-16-05, 05:54 PM | #40 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
You should make your new name that. Dr. Kale. Paging Dr. Kale.
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08-19-05, 02:40 AM | #41 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
do i smell a cheap aqua song rip off?
lmlo....ps, got a new OM idea
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08-19-05, 03:12 PM | #42 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Dreams chasing me, when my presence starts to exist,
Just an untold story of the shark and the fish, i just realized i love this line
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09-28-05, 12:45 PM | #43 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: D8CE C87F
Wasnt bad i liked it keep it homie.....
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09-28-05, 08:41 PM | #44 | |||||||
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: 28AD 5545
good flow good vocab and excellent emotion i give it 9/10
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09-28-05, 09:16 PM | #45 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: A2CF 2639
Your concept is ok.. Not exactly something that provokes emotion or thought.. It kinda makes me say "Well ain't that some shit? I wonder what's on TV.." Dumb down your language because no one really wants to read that shit.. Haha. Not tryin to shoot you two down, it was pretty good. You had nice flow, and the imagery was well done. Truely, keep droppin'. Peace.
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