Please drop the same verse that you had written before the previous battles were deleted.

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Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!

tac tics, tic tac's dislexic.. yeah

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As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...32&page=2&pp=15
post 22

nice battle, but my vote goes to Hotshh!

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uppin for more votes........................................

Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
^^decent opener, not to hard hitting or personal thou............7/10
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
^^nice bar, setup lacked............................................ .7.5/10
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
^^nah, wasnt feeling this bar......................................5/10
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
^^decent bar............................................... .............6/10
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
^^nah, this was rather weak......................5/10
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
tictacs, blah blah, got it but it wasnt much of a closer man...5/10

a couple decent bars, but your verse veared off near the end
creativity was pretty good for the most part, personals were
weak thou.....a little too stretched......35.5/60
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As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
^^ok play.................6/10
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
^^lol,.decent line..............7/10
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
^^eh, couldve been better...........5/10
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
^^nice bar...................8/10
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
^^lol,....hmmm,...6/10
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
^^eh, this was blah.....4/10
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
^^nice............8/10
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good verse, shit was pretty consistent, closer was nice
some fillers in there thou that i wasnt fellin.....44/70
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vote/hot

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

wet willy:

Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
^^ nice opener good wordplay 7/10
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
^^ nice punch 8/10
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
^^ ROFL lol this was dope 8.5/10
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
^^ not really feelin this 6/10
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
^^ ok punch not really feeling it 5.5/10
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
^^ lolkinda played but ok 6/10

41/60


i felt that some of your lines were stretched but you did ok... good punches decent wordplay but you also had some played shit in there...


Hotshh!!:

As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
^^ good opener personal there... 7/10
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
^^ good punch 7/10
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
^^ lol decent personal is it played? 6.5/10
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
^^ haha this was funy as hell.... 8/10
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
^^ decent personal here 8/10
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
^^ lol ok i spose not rlly feeling it though... 7/10
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
^^ nice wordplay 7.5/10

52/60

i felt this verse was strong and you stayed consistant throughout the whole verse this was a dope drop..
good battle but imma go with hotshh on this one.

v/ hotshh

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Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
5...decent wordplay, but the punch was lacking really, and the whole car-toons/ car tunes concept i have seen used before!!
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
6...better, the 2nd line was funny but a different approach to the whole concept cud've made it better!!
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
8...LMFAO!!!! an original idea and it was fuckin hilarious to!!!
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
5...nah!! the multies were nice but the punch itself was not affective, also unless he specifically said "he wants to be homeless" it seems more of a fake personal than a punch!!
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
7...kind of a played concept but the whole comic shit about it made it a dope line!!
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
7...LMAO!!!! a dope closer, the tactics/tic tacs line was creative!!!

OVERALL: 38/60 (63.3%)


As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
6...decent personal, but the 1st line wasn't all that good!!
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
6...another nice punch, but the vocabs are pretty basic!!
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
5...not feelin this bar, the setup was kinda bleh!! and the 2nd part to the bar has been done before!!
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
7...LoL!!! this was a nice bar, the 2nd part to it made me laugh!!
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
7...a nice personal, some better lines from you!!
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
6...this line seems kinda rushed to me, and it is a similar idea to something i have seen before, just with a new twist on it!!
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
7...decent wordplay, the first line kinda played, but the 2nd line was dope!!

OVERALL: 44/70 (62.8%)

now that is a close battle!!!!
but overall i think will took it by a fraction for having a couple of real nice lines, hotssh was consistent but had nuthin that really jumped out at me and made me think "yea, that was fuckin dope and original!"

V/ - Wet Willy

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thanx for the vote, uppin

sik wit it, please put your vote as well

and ice d, crew votes arent cool, so i hope u were honest

^^^^^^ it mighta been, but i wouldnt be surprised if it was an honest vote... cuz this battle coulda gone either way dependin on wat kinda style u like

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

hotshh! 3

Wet Willy 1

ohh btw.. i would not like OZ or Eph voting on my battles...

Oz because i have a battle open with him on my alias and he has a tendency to hate on my..

Eph has a tendency to not understand a lot of punches.. if this is a problem somebody get at me on aim-GameOva119

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Wet Willy

Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
good opener...6.5/10
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
nice...7.5/10
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
....lmao....8/10
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
skraight bar...7/10
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
ehhhhh...5/10
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
that line was hot as hell....9/10

43/60(71.6%)

Hotshh!

As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
good opener...6/10
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
nice....7/10
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
skraight...couldve been worded betta...5/10
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
nice....8/10
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
skraight.....6/10
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
weak...........4/10
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
nice.....8.5/10

44.5/70(64%)

v/wet willy

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