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12-01-04, 02:29 AM | #1 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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my new song
IP: E9FD B9B9
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ggggunitmusic.htm
fludimooons gonan be on it and any other femcees that interested i still have alot of work to od but its alot of improvement from the crew collab lol
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12-01-04, 02:47 AM | #2 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: 070D 64A6
Nice drop. Flow needs more emotion, and to be blended a lil better with the beat, but you got some potential ma. Good to see the ladies finally spitting. Good looks to Willa and Fluid. There's been a gap ever since LK went MIA.
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12-01-04, 02:50 AM | #3 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: E9FD B9B9
thanks phenom i appreciate it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162657 i left feedback on this and im gonna hit up a few more
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12-01-04, 02:54 AM | #4 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Umm Flow...was aite...I couldnt make out what u sayin yo vocals were too down...turn it up...
I heard when u said " A superwomen fuck Christopher Reeves" Beat is nice....am feelin it Could be longer try to work on emotions u will get there spit more often....verse was 2 short.. Overall good drop is good seeing RV females steppin up
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12-01-04, 03:02 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
i agree with DeadlyVision this was a good piece.. but it was way too low ... you had a good beat and the flow was good... is this your first audio i dont think ive heard anything from you before... btw this is an alias... and you imed me for feedback but shhhh about who i am... but yea this was good... 7.5/10
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12-01-04, 09:15 AM | #6 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 058A F402
yea enygma already made the vocals louder lol
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12-01-04, 09:46 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
flow was actually good..
but on my cpu the beat played for 5 minutes strait after you spit.. is that suppose to happen but still good drop l lizzle yizzle
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12-01-04, 10:14 AM | #8 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 058A F402
yes because 2 more ppl are going to drop on it lol
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12-01-04, 10:39 AM | #9 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 80C5 FF8A
Nice nice, flow was all on point, at times I think you would have benefitted from being more articulate in your pronunciation of words. But other than that, it was a pretty good track. Still looking to hear the second verse!
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12-01-04, 02:52 PM | #10 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
this is good so far, when i record my verse today,i'll fix up the quality a bit willa,then add some kind of hook or something,and send it to you!!!!!..woooottt....but you sound so much better then the last time i heard you,keep at it girl,we can only get better sweetie...1
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12-01-04, 02:52 PM | #11 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 11B9 9DA8
I liked this drop a lot! Nice going girl, the flow and everything was straight. Keep on dropping things like this, i know i'd certainly be listening to that...can't keep the ladies down no more, hehe
DQ
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12-01-04, 04:29 PM | #12 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 28AD 5545
good shit home gurl.............i liked it!
*nice drop ~1~ |
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12-02-04, 06:36 PM | #13 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 5043 32F4
tight... flow was good. tight beat andeverything.. nice jobs
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12-03-04, 10:06 PM | #14 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
wow, ur pretty good, hey will, can i use dat beat also?lol
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12-03-04, 10:29 PM | #15 | |||||||
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hmmm...this one seems like it will be nice...vocals are to low tho..really low...i cant really hear the lyrics...
well u gettin betta tho...maybe some more emotion... but definately turn up ya vocals...stay up shorty...
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