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Old 12-01-04, 02:29 AM   #1
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my new song

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ggggunitmusic.htm
fludimooons gonan be on it and any other femcees that interested
i still have alot of work to od but its alot of improvement from the crew collab lol
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Old 12-01-04, 02:47 AM   #2
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Nice drop. Flow needs more emotion, and to be blended a lil better with the beat, but you got some potential ma. Good to see the ladies finally spitting. Good looks to Willa and Fluid. There's been a gap ever since LK went MIA.
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Old 12-01-04, 02:50 AM   #3
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thanks phenom i appreciate it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162657
i left feedback on this and im gonna hit up a few more
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Old 12-01-04, 02:54 AM   #4
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Umm Flow...was aite...I couldnt make out what u sayin yo vocals were too down...turn it up...

I heard when u said " A superwomen fuck Christopher Reeves"

Beat is nice....am feelin it

Could be longer try to work on emotions u will get there spit more often....verse was 2 short..

Overall good drop is good seeing RV females steppin up
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Old 12-01-04, 03:02 AM   #5
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i agree with DeadlyVision this was a good piece.. but it was way too low ... you had a good beat and the flow was good... is this your first audio i dont think ive heard anything from you before... btw this is an alias... and you imed me for feedback but shhhh about who i am... but yea this was good... 7.5/10
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Old 12-01-04, 09:15 AM   #6
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yea enygma already made the vocals louder lol
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Old 12-01-04, 09:46 AM   #7
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flow was actually good..
but on my cpu the beat played for 5
minutes strait after you spit..
is that suppose to happen
but still good drop

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Old 12-01-04, 10:14 AM   #8
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yes because 2 more ppl are going to drop on it lol
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Old 12-01-04, 10:39 AM   #9
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Nice nice, flow was all on point, at times I think you would have benefitted from being more articulate in your pronunciation of words. But other than that, it was a pretty good track. Still looking to hear the second verse!

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Old 12-01-04, 02:52 PM   #10
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this is good so far, when i record my verse today,i'll fix up the quality a bit willa,then add some kind of hook or something,and send it to you!!!!!..woooottt....but you sound so much better then the last time i heard you,keep at it girl,we can only get better sweetie...1
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Old 12-01-04, 02:52 PM   #11
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I liked this drop a lot! Nice going girl, the flow and everything was straight. Keep on dropping things like this, i know i'd certainly be listening to that...can't keep the ladies down no more, hehe

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Old 12-01-04, 04:29 PM   #12
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good shit home gurl.............i liked it!

*nice drop

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Old 12-02-04, 06:36 PM   #13
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tight... flow was good. tight beat andeverything.. nice jobs
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Old 12-03-04, 10:06 PM   #14
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wow, ur pretty good, hey will, can i use dat beat also?lol
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hmmm...this one seems like it will be nice...vocals are to low tho..really low...i cant really hear the lyrics...

well u gettin betta tho...maybe some more emotion...

but definately turn up ya vocals...stay up shorty...
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