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07-29-04, 03:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
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U kno!!(an original song made 4 tha clubs)
IP: E351 4E97
~Verse 1~
Im tha hottest boy/ Nyghtmare tha Hunger Chyld comin thru makin noise/ A-T-L-A-N-T-A/ Georgia is tha state where i stay/ Young and Dangerous/ Haters act like Kriss Kross cuz i make em jump/ Dressed in all black/ I carry a berretta that make everybody lean back/ Dont get it twisted, fam/ Cuz i'll drop u 2 tha ground havin tha whole crowd say GODAMN/ Im here 2 let u haters kno/ Body shots send ur whole crew into flipmode/ ~Chorus~ U kno how we get crunk in tha club/ Atl holdin it down, showin tha whole world whatz up/ Im comin thru as tha young star of tha south/ Get buck if u wanna, then watch me spray rounds/ ~Verse 2~ N-y-g-h-t-m-a-r-e/ Be tha name so all haters respect me/ Dont underestimate tha kid/ Im tha Hood Reaper so when u die its not grim/ Can't Stop, Won't Stop/ U don't need young gunz, u need a warrior that'll pop glocks/ Club Banger is what im called/ U steppin 2 me is like Bow Wow steppin 2 Roy Jones/ I dont have sympathy/ 4 these fake rappers wantin 2 be like me/ Dont get nothin started/ Cuz 2 many head shots leave ya'll niggas retarded/ ~Chorus 2x~
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07-29-04, 04:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: FDD6 AE15
not greatly original I liked your first one better, your structure was all over the place although I was feelin the chorus you had here. the last line in the chorus could be upgraded though.
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07-29-04, 04:26 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: E351 4E97
I knew it wasnt hotter than tha freestyle i posted but im work more harder and keep bein hungry and ready 4 war. Thankz 4 tha feedback kizz and like i told ruff tuff thug shout out 2 ur whole crew, ~much luv~
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07-31-04, 04:29 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 7C6F 690C
yo man you should check ma battle wit mc skiltz plz i need a vote
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07-31-04, 07:22 AM | #5 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 8088 EF2D
yo nytemare dis raw killa of B.A.M nice drop structure n flow could b worked on a lil but overall nice drop keep postin much luv holla back nigga
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07-31-04, 10:06 AM | #6 | |||||
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IP: AF9B 73D9
was aight, fl0ow was off.. as well as struvcture...
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