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08-29-05, 06:44 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Live My Life(audio)
IP: 92F0 4BDD
LIVE MY LIFE
http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/broyao_music.htm tell me wassup with it, here are da links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206551 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206050 holla back |
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08-29-05, 06:49 PM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
playing.
beat should never used that beat. Intro,is weird. your putting a huge change into your normal voice, try spitting your rhymes with your usual voice.dont fake anything. (hope thats not your real voice) Overall the track isnt good. |
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08-29-05, 06:49 PM | #3 | ||||
"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 5F4F B70C
no beef yo ....buh keep practicing fa real....practice on everything... you cant even really hear wa chu sayin cus it sound like u mumblein, or wateva...and not on beat...sound like u just sayin shit, puttin words together,...stay up.........
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08-29-05, 07:12 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 5467 E2B2
i really cant judge English hip-hop cuz even the famous ones sound just weird to me like their flow is off.. but i know its just cuz im not used to it....
but, like everybody else is saying i thought it sounded like u were trying to hard to sound a certain way, just flow yourself dont fake shit.. and yeah like Montana said it was hard to follow the verse..
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08-29-05, 08:55 PM | #5 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
lol..................................
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08-29-05, 09:13 PM | #6 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
Beat waz aight but not along wit the voice, you scream too much I hardly could understand, but I figured that if you speak clearly the track will be good, keep practicin, no beef.. peace
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09-01-05, 02:59 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 48EC BFDC
yea i been hearin that like a muafucka, i guess ima tone down da anger on da next track
holla at me tho, if you got any advice or feedback |
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09-02-05, 05:57 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 48EC BFDC
wassup yall, only make me get betta with cristism righ?
haha |
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