this is for all of ya haters talking this and that, he aint good, he aint making it big, blah blah blah ya know what the fuck ya be saying,
well this is my personal song for u TAKE IT IN BLOOD BITCHES......


u should watch ya comments befor i have to rub it in
cause i aint talk'in,
i'll just put it on pape and shove-it-in
walk'in-towards with shots runn'in in
and i aint tripp'in, cuz my dark-side aint begin
YEA, all im all use to is the content of wins
and i feel u flow better,
then its a tube in ya lungs reducein ya pace of wind
burn'in up like no movement on rotate'in rime's
and u aint got no FAN's, u just like to watch it spin
YEA, my punches is pure muscle,
so if u think u got body, then my back-yard u can lay right-next-to-them
cancleing ya high-hopes ,
cuz u'r chances of making it big is smaller then a mexican
and if i see ya at the bar then its a shell place right next to ya jin
plus a personal inventation to a morge with a bullets place above ya chin
YEA, there aint no other replaceing him,
so if u see a wanna be double, its probley a tag-team-win
why should i rock u hard,
when u'r faker then a sean-Jhon shirt....... but da tag say slim *ha*
YEA, i see ya sun-shine start'in to deam
im a person of god,
but u fucked, and my feeling's 4 it is like evil-commenting a sin
yea, ya viewing seening I.E back-at-it again
cuz ya hate'in on my joker style so im laughing again
back'in my mens, eps hear me,
u aint gotta be down cuz I dont want clowns actin as friends
but if u real then u'r my back to defend
and i wont stop like a m-track, cuz dog im going foward till-the end
yea, there still cats that aint feeling me,
puting the gorge formen on- grillin me
but silly me, i forgot im dealing with killa's,
so understand when i say i got more bars then a correctional-facilities

BANG BANG-- EARLY........

its whatever from here on out,
what!!!

not bad..some tight bars though...i don't kno who you beefin though....

yo nice drop i feel u lotta so called thugs n rappers on gased up thinkin they da shit n every1 else sucks keep postin n doin ya thing holla back check my crew song troubled minds posted my ruff tuff thug peace out

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nice bars but the structure was not good o well it doesn't even mattter nice verse i never knew you do open mic i alway see you in battles i never knew you had time for open mic

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

its not directed to anyone just in gerneral to all who sleeps on me or think i aint got what it takes,
basicly all those who said i was in trouble cuz i made a forgotten-flow-diss aka yung duke which lead to a battle plus hes defeat so this is like my victory song to those who was sleeping or thought it wouldnt had been possible basicly,

and i love the feed back from everyone thanks alot....

thanks for u'r feed back....
hey maybe i can see what u got to offer one of these days...

nice shit... not the best...
its ok tya structere wasnt that good...
but his is an ok open mic...
im bored i want a rematch punchline battle...

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

^^^^ set it up,
make it due tomorrow around 2m afternoon im about to go to sleep one....

I LIKED IT AFTER READING IT AGAIN,STRUCTURE WAS OK...YA KNO....
CHECK OUT MY TOPICAL IN OPEN MIC...........

^^ thanks alot of the feed back........

its like king kong aint got shit on me
climing to the top with fire-arm, ......... like i had burning sleevs
aint no emcee out there really concering me
cuz my flow lava N only reason u hot, ...... is if u got skin burned to the 3ed dagree
and i like to give shots,
so if u recieve one then, ...... its likely u'r in serguery
dont follow me,
cuz bullets i'll have u take that step back as if i reverse u'r knees
so dogs believe,
i sell more bodys then a stripper ouction
and know so many ballers,...... u could fill the court's-in
cuz i got more niggas ryde'in out in my circle,....... then them race-hores
YEA,
the blue-gray beam known for floss'in,
so if u see the "RED-fall'en-out" ...... they aint dieing from natrual causes
so plez dont forget who u face'in like u had "old-timers"
cuz the cops gonna have to dig deep,..... as if they was "gold-miners"
YEA,
im take'in all platnum and bright shyners
only to pon-it N keep doing it,..... till i see more bricks then them rock-climers
now look at this basterd,
mad, ......... cuz shot played the roll in hes "POP'" finder (paps)
keep looking at my bitch when she got the glock be-hinder
cuz grill'in only gonna have face pushed up and down on grinder
YEA
so quite playing with me and my free's
cuz i handle my-self with glocks and these,
which got ya profit time-stop'in, like i wear-it under my sleevs (get it )
so ya best to believe,
my key's gonna blow like alisha on knees (ha)
then toss ya body in the ocean, ..... with peranahs feist'ing on what u use to breath
YEAH,
so imma tell u like this playboy u need to leave
cuz my bullets brolic, they will levft u with ease
and have u boop'in for help like i knock'ed ova christer-reevs BITCH....

BANG BANG EARLY..................



I TOLD U IM GOING HARD FROM HERE ON OUT,
FUCK THAT THIS SWEET-SHIT FUCKING SAD SONG MAKING FUCKING WHAT IF SONGS AINT GOT SHIT ON ME......

IM THE REAL, U JUST THE FAKE
SO US TOGETHER IS LIKE WHAT BUSH AND BEN-LADDEN WOULD MAKE!!!!
BITCH.....


P.S ANY COLLABOS OUT THERE THAT WANNA HOLLA,

JUST HOLLA

AND COME RAW,

HOLLA...

nice shit...nice flow, though kinda confusin at times, but it worked....7/10

he nice shit man 6/10

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