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Old 09-16-06, 10:12 AM   #1
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Poetry In My Opinion...

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Poetry in my opinion....

music melodies
possesing my heart
story's telling me
love is never to far
writing from within
spilling my emotions
hand clamping my pen
words running
free like the ocean
no start or end
my mind never quits
poetry is my friend
failure i'll never admit
for my words and writing
is which i speak through
there's nothing to be hiding
rather it's fiction or true
poetry is a way to express
if it wasn't for she
i'd have alot less
reminding me to be me
and to relieve the stress
releasing feeling through each sentence
i really never hold back
for everything's my opinion
it helps me relax
a poet i am, creating music
poetry is fun
which is why i choose not to abuse it
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Old 09-16-06, 10:12 AM   #2
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Old 09-16-06, 11:43 AM   #3
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Very nice, your structure was pretty on i liked all of it except where you put stress with sentace, i thought it ran one to many sillibals but other than that i was pretty dope and supported your topic well, good shit valor, keep droppin!
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Old 09-17-06, 03:24 AM   #4
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word good lookin and i put less with stress but no biggie good feed dude thanks
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Old 10-22-06, 08:05 PM   #5
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upping this shizzleswizzle
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Old 10-22-06, 08:13 PM   #6
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thsi was kool

short sweet yet nicely put and complex in a way..did a nice job. the inner rhyming and little storyline that went along with it aswell was just fantastic man nice job valor!..keep at it man..

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Old 01-06-07, 03:34 AM   #7
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ya dig


em hmmmmm
yall should of enjoyed this while it lasted
my last piece ever possibly on rv


yet ill still be doing collabs
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Old 01-19-07, 04:17 PM   #8
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Good shtuff as alwase valor.....the topic was tight but i felt tword the end of the poem you started to force your rhyme
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Example:
a poet i am, creating music
poetry is fun
which is why i choose not to abuse it..
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it really sounded like you were trying to hard to find a decent ending...next time just dont force it...but yeah a dope drop either way
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poetry is my friend
failure i'll never admit
for my words and writing
is which i speak through
there's nothing to be hiding
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Old 01-21-07, 08:08 AM   #9
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lol---good too see i still got some left n her tank
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Old 01-23-07, 03:58 AM   #10
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sup son..

man we need som deep activity in here...
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