Battle Rules:

5-15
No Crew Votes.hate.dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 04:27 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 03:57 AM.

ayo lets go!

mr.zachy doom dont u know ill give u a brain toom-er
got ya dome all mixed like a maze
got u loosin dayz off ya life i keep threatin u with a knife
sayin ill stealth up on your back side
comin harder then the tide of a hurricane
as my ryme drillz ur ass got u back to doin cocaine dealz
and quitin rap battles merkin this bitch so much he might tattle
my flows are iller then a drug dealer givin pillers of cocaine rocks
kickin ur ass and makin fun of ur group the gay jocks
im typin with socks on my hands i got a warrent for my arrest
for givin u sick flowes to ya chest i got arrest-ed just member im the 1 who wast-ed u

MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 04:10 AM.

I beg your pardon sir,
I've yet to see your skills,
So now I guess it's time,
To show us what you will,
I swear I won't make judgements,
Even though you probably suck,
But whatever, dude,
You're just 15
And "just don't give a fuck."
Your parents probably wonder,
Well, if they're still around,
But I bet you're just a white kid
Who think's he's black and "down."
But back to what I was saying,
Your parents think you're weird,
A white, suburban kid
Who likes drugs and drinks beer.
Actually, you probably don't
You probably sit at home
And play on your computer
Stiff, like a garden gnome.
I have no idea
Where I'm going with this rap
So I guess it's time to "wrap" it up
And end this stupid crap.

gay. this was more of a shitty poem.

eh...u went way pass 15 but w/e uppin for votes uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```

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hahahhaa you both suck set up and i'll battle you either one of you

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

BOTH OF YALL VERSES WAS WACK THEY BARLEY RHYMED IT WAS SHITTY BUT SLICK HIT MZD WIT HARDER PUNCHES WEAK FLOW,STRUCTURE YALL BOTH NEED 2 ELIVATE A WHOLE LOT

Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

ok everyone had sumtin wrong and sumtin good about them

(B)MR(/B):
good: better punches overall and nice flow
bad: bad structure semmed streched

(B) S.S. (/B)
good: structure and flow
bad:didnt rhyme and horible punches

^that is explained*

vote/MR

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144192

return the favor-no hate votes plzzz

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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

skills won this shit...

Mr.zachy doom elevate dawg...

flow=skillz
structure=skillz
punches=neither


best line for slick



my flows are iller then a drug dealer givin pillers of cocaine rocks
kickin ur ass and makin fun of ur group the gay jocks


zachy doom= none..

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

man click took this 100%
slick-
nice puches 8/10
good stukture 7/10
nice verse 7/10-overall
ha ha ha mr.
NO puches 1/10
stuture 3/10
WEAK AS FUCK 1/10-overall
plz return da fav on my battle with yvonne in my sig