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Old 08-13-06, 11:26 AM   #1
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27. Oz. (1-1) vs 28. Erel Avent (7-3)

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Old 08-13-06, 12:22 PM   #2
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Old 08-15-06, 01:30 PM   #3
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Old 08-16-06, 11:42 PM   #4
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Man Erel Aint Shit, So I Wont Speak on his beefs
Bcuz we all know That Erel Avent Weak Like Babies Teeth
Dont talk bout sellin White, Wigga When All your doin is buyin
Erel aint No G he Should Die from Luekeemia Bcuz he Aint Got No Iron
Man Messin wit Me You'll only end up in a Pine Box
His Crew Aint BIG They More Like The Disease Bcuz they Tryna Be Small Pox (Pacs)
After This Battle Ill have Erel Tryna Change His Career Pathway
And He'll Be Screamin Lord Help me Like His name Was Donny Hathaway
you hatin on me? I'll kill and take your last breath so you wont sigh
Erel always Talkin bout how clean his cars is But They Like chickens
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Old 08-18-06, 02:12 AM   #5
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listen..

your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
a verse posted like yours, wont do to much for your health
sheit.. you should do like the white boy in home alone & slap yourse.f
I didnt even wan' post after peepin ya shit, an L it will cost
..so when its put before you Oz its blatent whos seein the Loz
I burn holes thru newbies, sit down & take your seat in class
..your gettin man handled & throw to the side like a lateral pass
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch

blah, you suck.
no motivation.
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Old 08-18-06, 12:30 PM   #6
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Old 08-18-06, 01:31 PM   #7
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Old 08-18-06, 01:38 PM   #8
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Wow, this battle right here was one sided through out the whole thing
Oz. you came meh...i mean you had some whack attempts with punches
you just rambeled as if u were throwing punches..u were but none of them
really hit imo. Erel you had some okay shit..much better than ur opponent
you had nice formed punches and what not..basically enough to get the W.

your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch

vs.

nothing


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Old 08-18-06, 01:40 PM   #9
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What? Are you serious?.....Lol wateva Man

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Old 08-18-06, 04:08 PM   #10
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stop spammin faggot, you suck.
thats gotta be the worse verse I ever wrote.


and you still lose, shut up & stop flooding this.

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Old 08-18-06, 04:22 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Erel Avent
Kempo just for the record, I always wait til saturday night to vote & comcast went down til like...NOW, due to this gay ass midwest storm. Turn on your weather channel, im not lyin.

I dont want an L, BOO!

You prolly would lost anyway had Kempo voted You had a good verse tho, you should join the 1-2 league, we need more good heads in it. Anyway...

your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch

vs.

Nothing

Oz, ya came really weak here. You just had lots of weak comparisons really. Like saying he'll be screamin'... so what? Not much of a diss, ya know what I mean? Try working on being more direct with the disses and bein' more witty. Stretch out that creative side of you. Erel, you didn't come that great, verse looked very half-assed. The netzero shit i've seen a few times, but you prolly executed it the best i seen it. Keyboard line was okay, rest was enough to get this.

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Old 08-18-06, 04:30 PM   #12
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Nothing

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your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
a verse posted like yours, wont do to much for your health
sheit.. you should do like the white boy in home alone & slap yourse.f
I didnt even wan' post after peepin ya shit, an L it will cost
..so when its put before you Oz its blatent whos seein the Loz
I burn holes thru newbies, sit down & take your seat in class
..your gettin man handled & throw to the side like a lateral pass
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch

An easy battle. Oz. is getting a bit better but he needs to word his shit better. Learn to make your shit more witty but at the same time have good flow and style with it. Erel took this with an ok verse with some good lines.

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Originally Posted by Stanza.
What? Are you serious?.....Lol wateva Man

Uppin for votes



ummm he was foreal when he said nothing


your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch


vs.




wtf nothing i felt at all...




no i'm not hating on you dude, but really your verse was below average... maybe you can do better i dunno new to RV... but this was bad


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Old 08-18-06, 06:39 PM   #14
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Nothing


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I didnt even wan' post after peepin ya shit, an L it will cost
..so when its put before you Oz its blatent whos seein the Loz
I burn holes thru newbies, sit down & take your seat in class
..your gettin man handled & throw to the side like a lateral pass


Weak battle i dont see how people said the keyboard line was quotable... how old is that concept and people still think its not played? doesnt matter erel had this won without the last bar


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Old 08-19-06, 12:54 PM   #15
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