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09-24-04, 09:33 PM
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A Way of Life
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ok this is my 2nd Poem my poems are always used to improve life and change the way we live here I go.... Title:A Way of Life Let's Discuss...your Discust... for the way you live... why must you thrust the fuss..life's just is what it is... See the green on the grass...and not the dirt from the past... and the your life will pass...and the positive nature will last... Think of ways to improve....and not everything to lose... so you won't expose the wounds...of the cities mood... it's rude to point with fingers..but not to point out the events... that bring us down like killing theivings and all the drug dealings? which is the attitude that keeps....the cities status as weak... we will ever reach our peek if we don't seek...the peace... complaining creates violence...and Voilence creates Pilots... being Hijact which created the 9/11 sightings.... ~finished~ please crit peace 1luv
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