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Old 07-29-05, 06:18 PM   #1
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Old 07-29-05, 07:08 PM   #2
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iite lets see.. i dont like da beat.. very mainstream american.... ok yea first off id say find your style... cos it seems america is influence ALOT n it shudnt really be... drop on ukhhf.co.uk ... n jus peep as many dat as u can as often as u can.... it will bring out da UK MC in u... you flow on beat.. its a basic flow but its on beat so its a damn vgood start for a first time... confidence lacked in it.... dat comes wit practice so ya kno stick at it n confidence will build and ur delivery builds wit confidence... lyrics were kinda basic and also very american and u dropped an american twang try find ur uk accent ull sound alot better and alot more natural... lots of potential.. keep at it and keep practicin mate
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Old 07-29-05, 08:12 PM   #3
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ye ye wassup blud..long time...thought ur ass was dead or sumin, aint seen u on RV in tiiimmme..wats ya name on ukhhf?.....gd 2 c u stabbin @ audio again

listening as i type:

beat is real nice...feelin it...ya hittin da snares real nice..flowin real nice...lyrics on that gangsta tip..but yo jus cos u on that level blud dont mean you cant be creative try n b innovative in what marks you out from every other bre spittin bout the streets.....u soundin real grimey n rawkick em wid more aggression and itd sound real nice...im feeling this..you need betta quality, or betta mixin, i cn giv it a go 4 ya...get @ me...as 4 the UK accent thing dnt even watch that blud...i used to spit wid a thick twang...you'll loose it da more you spit...2 b honest im kinda likin dis...not tryin to inflate ur ego but dis was nice 4 ur 2nd audio blud...

get @ me 4 a collabo or sumin well tell dese breddaz watsup ya feel...peace

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Old 07-30-05, 05:15 PM   #4
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Beat is dope, flow is eee dont like it, mmm you dont really sound good on that type of beat, but seriously, for a first audio its pretty good
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Old 07-31-05, 03:27 PM   #5
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*listenin while leavin feed*

beat is nice am feelin u can use it for a diss...

flow- monotone quality is iffy but u dont sound british fam, flow is there, needs upp presence a little..but mike tyson line..lol word holla at me we can get some shit craccin..
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