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02-09-04, 05:58 PM | #1 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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ill flow leave feedback!!!
IP: 4577 CD9A
its easy to see im the illest emcee in the streets// to dope for the industry, cuz im alwayz bringin the heat//when i take out a .44 theres gonna be more dead, get a headache from wankstas//take it out, and put it in your head//rippin haters like paper, so fuck you if you hate me// face me, im ill enuff to give your dogs rabies//emcees get slain and splattered when they fuckin brains get batterd, insane ass rapper// but im the best, thats all that matters//i spit lyrical fire, spit lyrical shells galore// even if they miss you, i'll still murder you with metaphors//put several more in ya chest until you admit im the best// aint no competition, i know im better than all the rest//
theres no way you can win in a battle of you and I, matter of fact, you got a better chance of living thru suicide/ lyrical soulja, ya flows are sober and dead/ my words are a mighty river, that "flows over your head"/ my blows to ya head strike harder than white lightning, im frightening, with unique skillz that are actually worth biting/ but dont try me, or ya talent gets crashed like trade centers/ shoot ya so fast ya heads rotatin faster than plates spinnin/ so listen, close and i wont have to mention again, the danger of testin ya weak ass flows against the prince/ of rappin that is, so dont get it twisted at all/ cuz if you get hurt fuckin wit me, then homie, you are at fault/ Last edited by cruelintentionz : 02-09-04 at 06:00 PM. |
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02-09-04, 06:12 PM | #2 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I stoped reading after first few bars..your structure made it diffcult to read...peace..
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02-10-04, 05:04 PM | #3 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 399E F0FD
aight pen thanx homie
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07-30-04, 09:07 AM | #4 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 01CD 3A2F
well what can i say but welcome aboard. I mean like you do need some improvement but dont we all. keep working hard and continue doing your thing shorty.
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07-30-04, 09:18 AM | #5 | ||||||
...tha princess of rv...
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
..all self glorification
and structure fucked........ dint bother readin it coz of that fix it.
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07-30-04, 09:23 AM | #6 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: CCAE A7E8
yeah me too....
didnt even get onto the 3rd line .......................................... |
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07-31-04, 12:45 AM | #7 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 75DF D0BD
i think da problem wit peeps like riff raff n manipulation is u cant read for shit yea da structure didnt go rite in da beginin but as u get 2 da second paragraph he really comes out n self glorification dis comin from a bitch so desperate she gotta suck dick 4 battle votes cuz all no deep doen u choke artist biitch n e ways good drop work on da structure kid n welcom 2 d team fuck des mark ass bitch made hataz fo real 1 luv peace out n holla back
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08-02-04, 04:40 PM | #8 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4391 3AD8
damn i wrote this shit bout a year ago.....yall say whatever ya want i no its fucked up as hell
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08-02-04, 05:22 PM | #9 | ||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
repost it n revamp"rewrite it" with better structure....cause its too hard ta read like that n get da flow...pc
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