Battle Rules:

14-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
A Topical battle

Topic: Your telling A Girl why You love her



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-22-05 at 03:10 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 01:11 PM.

Dear Lover,
I Think You ask Me Why I Love You so well This Is why


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Good luck !!

Biggz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 01:27 PM.

Thanx mayne fo not Ditching Out on Me ............

I see your beauty in more ways than you know,
I love you more than I could ever show.
There are no words that I can use to express,
How much I care for you, but I’ll do my best.
I tease you about your deprived life,
Truth is it makes you more appealing in my sight.
You are a true person, and my luck is amazing,
I’ve never felt this way, I think I am going crazy.
I’m in love, that’s all I can say,
I hope that this confession does not turn you away.
You have helped me beyond belief, I owe you so much,
Whenever I thank God for blessings, my first one is luck.
My life was on its knees, but then you and God helped it back up,
You helped me see how far I was from how I was brought up.
I’ll summarize this song so you know what I have been saying,
I only need 4 words, I love you Megan!
I see your beauty in more ways than you know,
I love you more than I could ever show.
These words do not compare to how I really feel,
But nothing can express it, and that’s for real.

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Aii this Is how i Feel

King~~Dipset
Opening was great Mayne Im lovin This rii Here Your Last Two Stanza'a were great .......Um Far as Ya Structure i like To see it centered its better that way if you know what i mean And Also Your Last Closing Was Aii But Ya opening really Hooked my attention So Ya did Great
10/10

Biggz
You did ai But Ya Structure was off And ya topic Was like you were just Bitting Off of Dipset's verse But i can tell you Didnt But N e one else prolly couldnt Though Umm....>your lines were Cut short and its Not Good to be cutting ya lines short and stuff ...so ill have to give ya a
6/10

Sorry Mayne

Voted For: Biggz

you won this shit dawg i liked your rhymes and your skill nice lines and you could werk on ya structure a bit but tother than that you rolled this cigar homie

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

King Dipset- Your Verse on the topic was very nice....I mean you stayed on topic....Your vocab....was 100% nice i thought...Also showed alot of emotion at times...and your structure was very well layed out.....*8/10*....

Biggz- Your verse on the topic...ehhh i wasnt feelin it too much...but i mean it was decent....But you had some good vocab in it....But your structure maybe should be layed out more better n all......But overall.....*5.5/10*....

v/King Dipset

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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how did that vote from WO get DQed? i didnt complain or anythin

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Evry Now and then The MODS come through And delete All Unexplained votes But That vot ethat WO did was explained ......WTF .......aye nawl ...NVM ima win n e ways LOL

Voted For: King~~Dipset

THis was a decent battle...... kind of close, but i think Scareface definitely pulled it out.... HIs closer blew Biggz out of the water... and u also used metas to compliment ur verse

Biggz - u had a nice lil verse for this topical, but it was very straightforward and simplistic, and u need to up ur game for a battle.... u shouldve added in metas to make ur verse better cuz those really help in topical battles.... u juss sed "i love u" alot, and juss listed the reasons with no thought it seemed....

Scareface - on the other hand, u seemed to have urs well thought out.... the letter part about it was a nice addition to it that really helped ur verse in the closer... also the metas in ur verse surpassed ur verse over Biggz.... such as the Leaning tower one.. however, u could improve ur verse becuase u had some mistakes spellin and grammar, but that was prolly juss cuz ur head was workin faster than ur fingers wen u were typin this.....

Overall, this was a decent battle, but i think the more complexity and thought put into Scarefaces verse won him this battle in the end........

OHH, and i dropped an honest vote in ur battle...... can u please return the favor to the battle in my sig with CALI...... its been open for so long, and at times its gone days without a single vote..... id greatly appreciate it.... and please, if u do vote in it, make it long enough so it will not be dqed for a short explanation...... thanx!!

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

A FUx justaword That Link In Ya Sig dint work rii Mayne waz goin on .....I want to rtf But the link dont work