5-15lines
no d/r
no crew votes
no feeding
he spits first

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Yo sumbody please tell me dis wack ass nigga Discharge didn't jus instant message Young H/talkin bout do u wanna battle?..dude let me break it down ya not ready to battle against me/your not ready for what im'a do to u lyrically/so dont be gettin all up in mah face fake ass gangsta need to stick to preachin like mase/dont come flappin ya gums off at me/i'll have my F.L.G. niggaz lay u up in da I.C.U. eatin tylenol 3's,hooked up to lots of IV's and life support fightin for ya life tryin to breathe/dawg ya not worthy of challengin Young H if i catch u slippin im'a rearrange your face/find out where u live ride by 'n' shoot up ur place/then i'll go get ur mom give her more shots to da face then jenna jameson/i don't give a fuck what crew ya in don't take it personal dun we jus freestyle battlin/but ya battlin the illest,this is for all my niggaz put ya drinks in da air if u feelin this/i'm shittin all over this man this nigga have a better chance of goin to Afghanistan 'n' tryin freestyle battle the taliban/damn man i didn't wanna do this to ya but shyt to tell the truth im kinda glad/dis guy calls himself discharge i hope hes wearing a pad/when it comes to battlin Young H the best i suggest dis nigga discharge invest in a bullet proof vest/no make that a life insurance policy/cuz F.L.G. like the naitzes we droppin bodies/

Holla...thass it im not makin this nigga anymore famous it's over -1-

your ryhmes are like "snuggles" they soft,shit you should no that you already lost//
this is one mistake you made that will cost,second line and i allready finished you off//
you sayin shit like "u tha boss", "the boss" just got his ass tossed//
you not gonna win even if you prey graspin tha cross, ur ryhmes arent hott,they growin frost//

lets raise the bar and higher the stakes,virginia aint real mc's just fucking fakes//
you and your ryhmes are "fragile", they break, my ryhmes are too much for u to intake//
you couldnt beat me if u used my ryhmes in a "remake",your weak,already startin to shake//
my ryhmes are so sweet ill put the icing on tha cake,u already lost fates-fate//

skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq//
as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack//
see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash//
nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash//

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Young H u NEED TO ELAVATE WAYYYYYY Higher man ur not at da TOP OF Ur level u Need MUCH better Flow Rhymes And Structure well for a N00B ur AVRAGE but u NEED to ELAVTE Dogg ur Rap 6.3/10

Discharge u Did Way Better then YOUNG H its like Young h it was a First time steppin in to the dome of BATTLEiNg ur structure is a LIL weak but For everything else u did Exelent 8.5/10 i say


Young H

Open 5/10
Close 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 5/10
Structure 2/10

24/50

Discharge

Open 8/10
Close 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Punches 9/10
Structure 7/10

41/50

Good WORK Guys but DISCHARGE Pull THe WIN

Best Lines


skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq//
as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack//
see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash//
nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash//


YOUNG_H BEST LINE:

NONE

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ok heres my breakdown: young_H you did sweet for your first battle,but fix ya structure
overall: 19/30
betline:/no make that a life insurance policy/cuz F.L.G. like the naitzes we droppin bodies/
that was tight

ok

discharge u beat hiss ass but your not as new man step up and battle somebody good pick on some1 yor own size like me!!

breakdown:24/30 solid verse but bad structure

best line:skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq//
as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack//
see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash//
nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash//
if u dont like what im sayin bout you then battle me

hahah u thin you gotta chance at battelin me ahah yea right bitch
wre u serious?? haha

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H u need some damn work on your structure. Other than not rhyming shit was hard to read. Neither of u had good flow but discharge was better. I wasnt feelin this battle i thought u could have both done a lot better. Punches didnt go hard but i think that goes to discharge too.

Vote Discharge

Return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121115

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121083

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OMG young H wat da hell wat u thinkin dis was a lop sided battle discharge ripped dis fool

check it out
dicaharge-nice flow nice punches way betta structure

bestline-your ryhmes are like "snuggles" they soft,shit you should no that you already lost//
this is one mistake you made that will cost,second line and i allready finished you off//

^^ won da battle wit dat line ^^

worsteline-none

young H-bestline-didnt have 1

worsteline-yo whole verse

^^ but its ite i use 2 be like dat u a elavate homie

winner-discharge

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